HAHA I LOVE THIS!! If I could just complain about one thing that kinda jumps out at me is your hand not holding the pencil (the one on the page) is actually backward. The thumb would be on the side facing the torso. Just thought you should know. But this is really really REALLY adorable!!!!
Heyhey!! I know that -points at manga page- Was very nice......Love how everything ties together here in this and you can see hints of personality in all the characters as well.....very nicely done. -waves at characters-
This is great! Cute and at the same time funny!! I really like the coloring! Everything fits together so nicely!! The hands look really nice too!1 They're so hard to draw but you nailed them!! Very nice job!!